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Out Of Character => Beyond UNLEASHED => General Discussion 2009-2012 => Topic started by: Ryann on September 20, 2009, 05:18:46 PM

Title: Graphic
Post by: Ryann on September 20, 2009, 05:18:46 PM
I made this for another place I write at.  The guy's not a wrestler, but Maria manages the band he plays in with the father of her twins.  Anyways...  I kinda like the way it turned out.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v282/Ryann_Hardy/JayandMaria3.png)
Title: Re: Graphic
Post by: Remi Russo on September 20, 2009, 06:16:40 PM
the concept is good. I like the pink, and the brush used. only thing I would've done differently was make the characters pop a little more...i.e. adjust the brightness/contrast and add a mild glausian blur overlay layer. Nothing too crazy, since you woulnd't want the psd's to compete with the background.

8/10.
Title: Re: Graphic
Post by: V on September 20, 2009, 06:51:08 PM
i like it-- i do.  but what my eye picks out is that clothes in that particular shot kinda wind up doing this black-hole thing where you can't make out her body...
Title: Re: Graphic
Post by: Rex on September 20, 2009, 06:56:16 PM
i like that a lot. KUDOS to you for creating awesomeness.
Title: Re: Graphic
Post by: Jackson on September 20, 2009, 11:40:00 PM
Agree with V. The clothes kinda render the bodies invisible. I'd try brightening that up some to make the other details visible.